*adds to my favorites*

You are a great writer. You know how to write, and the poem obviously comes write off of the tip of the pen because your poem is beautiful and shows not one forced line.
Incredible write, and hope to see more of your poems.
Keep the ink flowing,
5/5
yellowfeverlime

Great job! I really enjoyed this poem.

Did you ever love me?
Did you ever care?
Did you ever think about me?
Wishing I was there?

This stanza says so much.
Take Care Cindy

I love it, really. I think we have a similar way of writing! 'Cause the way you write reminds me of myself. =)

Wow that is like the story of my life. It made me feel so much more understanding of my problems. Thanks Chris you really helped me out. 5/5 :)

I really liked this because I can see the emotions tied in with the words. This was not something you made up just to make a poem, this is your heart on paper. its great. check mine out sometime if you get a chance. 5/5
Bree

This poem is perfect, short lines throughout with excellent flow. I felt the same emotions that this poem talked about, even though they said I love you a thousand times, we don't believe they meant it once. Excellent job bro 5/5

I could tell u wrote this poem fast. i could tell that it something happened and u wrote this poem. it has alot of expression and alot of feeling. yup yup i understand. good job.

Loved it
i love the emotion
that you portrayed
throught it
keep it up :)

This was so inspiring. It reminded me of a poem I wrote a long time ago. The emotion put behind this was very great. Keep it up and im me if you want.

Sadly enough its a chance every time anyone starts to love some one else.. you did a great job on this one. so many people can feel you on different levels

5.5

I will always be here
there is nothing to fear
I will always care
and you can always share
even if love is a mistake
the chance ill always take
sometimes this will be it
the two with the perfect fit...
=]
thanks for your comment!

Lol, this poem made me want to cry and laugh at the same time, it completely explained the shit i was going through a few years back, and i love the retard part. that made me lol. great poem btw. 5/5