This poem wasn't bad at all. It started off amazingly and finished strong. Although it seems that the rhyming may have been a bit forced at the end. Never the less the poem was brillaint and i enjoyed reading it.

The first stanza was very, very good, amazing in fact, and was clearly my favorite stanza, closely followed by the second stanza. The words you used were every good. I also liked that in certain lines there were two rhymes, I was particularly taken with that.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for commenting on my poem 'A Destructive World'.

I really like the rhyme scheme but the 3rd cuatrain could be perfected a bit more.

But about the subj, i know where you're coming from, but don't be afraid to come out of your shell b/c you can't win if you don't try.

Oh my....that was perfectly sad! The image you put in my head with this poem is simply amazing. The flow was smooth and the rhyme scheme didn't seem forced to me. I love it! Keep it up!

That was a sorrow filled sweet poem, it spoke of the love that wasnt there and yet you crave, i absolutly adore it, one of the best i have ever read!!!! 5/5

You spelt reflection wrong:P haha
I really like it and I could really relate. keep up the good work.

DOVES AREN'T GOLDEN, STUPID. =P

I can relate to this it was so sweet

Amazing, there is no other word for this poem, it is just amazing.

WOWWY!!! this is ~amazing~
it rrly is. can u take a look at my poetry and tell me what you think. of course its nothing compared to yours but still <333

"I felt like I was shoved" this must be the most heartbreaking feeling in the world.
I like your poems, the flow and choice of words are exactly my taste..
Plz check out some of mine when you find the time.

Bless you,

5/5 Ingrid