I Love You [Shadorma]

by Kristina   Mar 7, 2007


I love you.
I just wish you knew.
I wish I
could tell you,
But I can't I'm just to shy
to tell you these words.

Copyright © March 01, 2007 - Kristina M

A Shadorma is a syllabic poem. It consists of 6 unrhymed lines, syllables going: 3-5-3-3-7-5

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  • 17 years ago

    by I Love You

    Good job on this. it was great! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    You know i think this poem is rated low because people dont fully understand the style i have a poem that is rated 3.3 and it may not be that good but i think it may be because of a different style. Good on you for trying this. It was really nice~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by L a u r e n

    Short but amazingly sweet.
    Love it.
    -Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by Coeur Cassa Sage

    Short, sweet, simple, i like it. It means alot.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hm. I like this poem. The structures cool. But I thought it was supposed to be a nonrhyming poem. You sorta rhymed...
    But I liked it nonetheless. It even reminded me of my poem- Those Three Words

    take care. 5/5--i've never seen that type of poem before.

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