Very nice

Ohmygodd it's so pretty. I'm in love with this poem. 5/5

This poem is a very simple form, but I think it adds to the meaning. It gives it a sharper, straight-to-the-point kind of tone. I was a little confused by your word choice in the last stanza, but I know you're talented and you know your stuff, so I'm sure there's nothing wrong with it. I just can't think straight today lol.

Very good Daniel- I always look forward to reading your work. Take care.xx