by LostEnigma Mar 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My life was once beautiful |
A really good poem I felt. I'm not usually a fan of death poems because they're usually all the same. You know 'I couldn't stand the pain in life, so to my wrists I held this knife'. Its all the same. I think this poem was a little like that but I liked yours because your character kept trying to die but just didn't have much luck. Oddly, I found that quite amuseing. I think the story was the best thing here, closely followed by the superb flow that you kept throughout. Good work love. I'm off to read part two. |