Hmm...Interesting poem. Not sure if this is always relevant but as some of my poems are...this is more of a story told in a poetic format. Is that fine...i dont know, if you think it is then by all means it is fine. Perhaps a little more imagery to go with this, to show...not only tell.

-Lord Rahl-

Hmm...Interesting poem. Not sure if this is always relevant but as some of my poems are...this is more of a story told in a poetic format. Is that fine...i dont know, if you think it is then by all means it is fine. Perhaps a little more imagery to go with this, to show...not only tell.

-Lord Rahl-