This poem reminds me of when I was back in junior high. When I was shy. I like the way this poem was structured. It has order and does not flow off topic, which is great. -chris

This poem is so great. last fall i had a crush on this much older guy(whom most of my love poems are about) everytime i he would look at me i would shy and couldnt look at him so it is a great poem for my collection.

Excellent poem, easy to relate to.
Great job 5/5

Wow.. cute poem.. sweet.. ry relatable to us teenagers.. beatifull