by Bradley Peter Mar 7, 2007
category :
Internet slang /
other
He'll say, 'How are you today?', in that soft calming voice |
by mossgirl19
I totally love the taste of darkness in this piece.! You just slayed it. |
This is a stand-out piece for me. It's in a similar style to 'Kiddy Killers'. Thank you |
I would have to say the slang was done in the highest taste like folk lyric |
This poem rocks!!! Though it's quite morbid... I really enjoyed reading it. "Dine with death instead"??? pls... not yet!!! Write more instead!!! Life is wonderful... God bless you!!! |
This is poem is lovely cause it is like me a lot. good job and keep up the good work. |
Theres nothing i can say that someone else hasn't already mentioned. but just wanted to let you know i enjoyed it. |