Comments : Hopeless Dreaming

  • 17 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    I really enjoyed your write darling, beautifull penned and very descriptive with a great use of imagery! Well done you painted a great picture with your words!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Good job. Your poems flow beautifully. Your writes are always enjoyable. I love every one of them. So good!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    How very sad this is it really touched me. Excellent job!

    Inside my mind, there lingers
    Just a thought of you tonight
    Bits of hopeless dreaming
    Of when you held me tight

    Really liked this part.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    To think of when you held me
    And the depths of distant dreams
    Will surely find romancing
    When you weigh the scheme of things

    This was my favorite part.
    great poem.