I really love this poem! It just spoke to me! I love the fact that it's saying how you live at the river and that the river is the place where you wash away everything, good and bad! Soon you fall in and it takes you away then you get into some rapids which could symbol the tough parts in life which was totally cool! I didn't much care for the ending...I mean although you hit the rapids you shouldn't give up so easily and just die....So I guess the ending disappointed me but, it was still really good! Keep it up!

This is a great poem, keep up the excellent writing