I like it. in ways it can be true. i give you props and a 5

I enjoy reading your poems. they are short and sweet but they still show the depth and meaning you want them to convey. keep up the great writeing!:D
** Bunny**

Man that one hurt that sounded like one against me well in a way

lol well got to go bye

Nope i only have one i changed the name i LOVE the name kei it means hope and every thing and everyone needs it.

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Another beautiful piece of work. ive been reading some of your poems and i find them relly inspiring. definately keep it up! xXx

Another beautiful piece of work. ive been reading some of your poems and i find them relly inspiring. definately keep it up! xXx

Soz ddnt mean 2 snd that twice!

Wow, 5/5, thanx for commenting on my poem, i'm truley glad, cuz this poem is so sweet. well holla, add me to hotmail if you want.... sun_shine_luvzya@hotmail.com

I can relate to that little girl..am inspired*

Wow...really nice..^_^

ps thanks for the comment

You know from other things i have red of your ...i kinda though you could of done better....it was ok

Ashley

That was reallly good!!...5/5 from me, and thanks for the comment... yeah moving on is the best thing... but my ex is my twin brothers bff, so it will be kinda ackward.. but he like still talks to me and stuff.. its just that we broke up out of nowhere... so idk im fine now tho, it happened on saturday?.. so ive had time to think, and hes talked to me.. i wrote that poem right after, but never got a chnce to type it on here haha

Lol I kinda found this funny I have no idea why. Anyways in my opinion I thought you used little girl too much but other than that I found it a pretty good poem! Keep writing! 5/5

Wow this was good. 5/5. thank you for the comment :)

Aww i really liked that... i can relate to it... thanks for the comment!
lyl~Danni~