Comments : A Destructive World

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Beautiful. and oh so true.

    happy writing-

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    An amazing poem. These pieces you do just stun me. You are so blunt and poetic all at the same time. Beautiful. These were my fav lines.
    One bad in the world, makes the headlines fast
    But a mountain of good, surely isn't to last
    One suggestion would be in line 12 substitue only for just to make it flow better.
    :)
    5/5 Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by LostEnigma

    Truer words were never spoken. Wish I could write like that.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    :D
    A very down right to the point poem.
    I like it. sorry I love it! It's all so true and every line means something else.

    I hope something happens to stop this madness soon.
    Keep writing and maybe it might!
    ;P