Im all mixed up
and i dont know what to do
im trying not to fall
and i place the blame on you
for you are the reason everything has changed
why everything is gone and nothing stayed the same
so now i start to realize that maybe you never actually cared
i can tell by the way you look right through me as i was never really there
so now its time to hold my head high and try to be strong
for i will find another and this feeling of hurt wont last very long
because your with her now i can finally see
that for the first time you are and always will mean nothing at all to me
-GREAT POEM!
I enjoyed it a lot!
Great ending, Structured well.
especially liked,
"so now its time to hold my head high and try to be strong
for i will find another and this feeling of hurt wont last very long"
-You are talented.
I like your quotes as well. Don't stop writing!
Keep it up! :)