I loved your song! I wish I could write songs but I can only write short poems. I think it's good. I gave it a 5!

St Jimmy

long live Billie Joe

I liked this. This was really well written. However, I don't think you need the last line in there. And you forgot a letter in the word THE. But that's ok. I'll point it out for you anyway:

[verse 3]
I'm swimming in all the lies
Just an angry ocean
Whipping me with blames and guilt
I try to swim for safety
But I just fall further into the ocean of lies
Doing Eighty-Five in my truck
Can spin the hours away from me
But always in th[E] end
I'm back with reality

great job 5/5.

Awe. I liked this a lot. It flowed well & was greatly written.

But when I heart his voice [heard*]

I loved verse 3. I thought it was really good. My favorite by far :]

Keep it up, hun. amazing.

Bri x

Hey, i thought this was really good. i loved the lines,
"Doing Eighty-Five in my truck
Can spin the hours away from me
But always in th end
I'm back with reality"
well done hun!!
Doing Eighty-Five in my truck
Can spin the hours away from me
But always in th end
I'm back with reality

Oops, sorry, its not meant to repeat those lines again in my comment lol. typing error!
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

Great job!! I loved the song! You should preform it and tack it onto YouTube! lol =] Glad that it's not about Wesley!! =]

Ciao