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  • 17 years ago

    by josh mills

    I like it its short and sweet.
    good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job dude. 5/5
    -vino

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I like it very much. It is short but very powerful. You wrote this piece greatly. Your wording is always excellent. Atmosphere that you created in this poem is unique and haunting. 5/5