Nice i really like this pome, i can understand where your comeing from.
5/5 =]
r/c bk
p.s i got two new pomes 'servent of the shadows' 'i assure you'

I almost cried when I read this because I had someone in mind the whole time ~ A poem is really strong when it can pull out a certain emotion ~ Wonderfully written, I added it to my favorites ~