I hope evry one like my newest one

Hey,
ok honest opinion, i like the way rhyme and the flow of this poem but i thought the subject and just overall it was al ittle cliche. At the end i think it should have a question mark, and you needed to use punctuation to make it better. I mean you used none and that kinda put me off. ANywyas i sad poem thought i think it would be better if you put it in the sad love peom section. Keep writing! xx

I understand your pain! Be strong! 5/5

Omg...i almost started crying...that is so sweet..I love it...if you get a chance, try reading mine...only if you'd like to though ^0^

Wow this is great i love it...................
Great job
Leona