This was very expressive write! i think the flow would benefit from using a different format for your poem as it reads now it kinda all blends together srta like a story...all in all you described a hurt that i can really relate to.

for this last line

i proved to you wrong for i faced you my demon

i think it would read easier if you removed the 'to' after the word proved.

no i am no poetry expert so these are jus my opinions and personal suggestions.

Glad to see u got more poems on here ape i think laura might be right about the flow of this poem. I have a contest for rape poems called untold stories in the main discussion board after polishing this beauty up u might want to enter it.