That was a very good poem. Good job. I thought there could be a bit more rhyming though. I didn't catch the rhymes until the last lines. But great job on the theme. =)

It's like a scene right out of a movie, beautiful! You captured the simple gestures of love that many take for granted. This poem just flowed flawlessly and would make an excellent country song :) Well done 5/5

All the smiles you brought to my face;
They've never left my beating heart.

I love those two lines .
It just really stood out to me . Well done on this poem . Nice rhymes & it`s like a scene taken right out of a moviee! But I loved it (:
..__MiNDYY

WoW its definatly a very beautiful poem! i greatly enjoyed it! i love the fact at how your sort of telling a story and it definately flows nicely because of that fact! keep up the good work! 5/5!

Awww I love this!! I've been there before maybe that's why I loved it so much! The flow was amazing nice job! 5/5

So sweet and touching,expression and wording is strong
Well done
PS:I was trying to read your profile but your profile write is somewhere disappears,i mean press enter a little times to make it fit the place,i hope this would be helpful for you
Keep it up hun
See ya
Laura

Very sweet poem there is lots of emotion in it and i always think that makes a poem better teh stanza's were really well set out as well xxx

Excellent job on writing this! i absolutely love it! it was very well written. you did a wonderful job on it 5/5

~Kristina

Aaawwwweee 5/5 for sure! that poem was EXCELLENT! sooo wonderful. this is byfar the best poem i have read on the site. i love it. *adds to favs*

Wow! this was so sweet! i loved it, your descriptions were perfect in this poem! completely perfect! 5/5

Hunny.. This was absolutley amazing. It was so beautiful & the imagery was just.. WOO. breathtaking, really. It flowed so well & the rhymes were good. Nothing seemed to be at all forced. The detail & description in this.. is absolutley wonderful.

You said, "Baby, lets runaway from here;
Take my hand and we'll run together.
We'll run to a place were we can only love;
A place where things will always get better."

^ This really hit home hard.. I loved it. Sounds very familiar to me.. Brought tears to my eyes. I loved it.. So much.

Beautifully penned, dear.

Bri [x]

This poem is really good. i like it alot!

Awhh this poem is sweet<3 i love it. great job! i gave it a 5/5.