by Elapsed Mar 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I tell you what I want, in the hope that is what you have to offer. Yes commitment is what I desire, honesty is what I hold dear and trust is how it should be. A love so strong that nothing can go wrong, I'm not after a casual thing, or some one night fling. |
WOW, by far the best so far and you really hit the nail right on the head with this one ^.^ I'm going through a hard time right now with my boyfriend and really needed to hear this one right now =) Thank you for that ^.^ Fantastic poem and it more then deserves a 5 =) |
So, so true. I truly love this poem it should be in a hallmark card only its deep. |
And to Add - I give you a 5.0. |
I really like this poem. That's exactly how I feel like love should be...except I see it a little differently since I'm a girl and all, but amazing poem and thank you for your comment on mine! |