For That Butterfly

by Goran Rahim   Mar 8, 2007


Once,
You were a lover too,
You should know
How I feel.

Seeing you
I get butterflies in stomach,
That you are trying to kill.

Do not kill that butterfly,
Give it a life
Whenever I see you.

Not for me,
But for that butterfly
Just once,
Tell me "I love you"

* my dear readers, please accept this poem for now, I am posting this after 24 emails since my last poem asking for a new poem.Also, sorry for deleting (the guilty pen) as i dont believe in its message.

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well i was sad that you deleted the other poem. but this one is a nice one to take its place.

    5/5 always. David

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very interesting quick fix for your fan club! Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    The symbolism is great in this poem. Despite that it's short, you discussed very well you're intended message. I thought the butterfly was a excellent choice for your connotation, kudos.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Beautiful poem, the symbolism was excellent and I loved that you chose a butterfly. You're an amazing writer, keep the poems coming! :)

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Another great poem.
    I liked it alot.
    5/5
    take care.

    ~Chelsea

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