by Kristina
Wow this is really good! i defiantly enjoyed reading this very much! i think you did a wonderful job on it. it flowed nicely. keep it up 5/5 |
by Tricky Daze
This was perfect,i liked especially those |
by Brittany C
I really liked this poem. It's great, please keep up the great work:) |
by Mousie
Love it as always, beautiful love poem, you always know how to make it work!!! 5/5 of course like always. |
by Joe
Really nice poem. Nice choose of words and i loved how flowed together. Plus it reminded me of something between my gf and I. Just keep writing |
Oo luv the poem!! i wrote a poem called somethin like it but its bout somethin else....luv it!! |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
This poem is just so cute, Goran. I enjoy reading your work. You are so sweet. I enjoy comments from you (and everyone else); I like how I don't always have to ask you for them. |
by Allison
You have really fabulous poems. But I really like this one. Because I can relate to it. I also happen to LOVE the title. <3 Great job! =] |
Quite interesting indeed. The way these simple words are beautifully used, to the pacing. It makes it short and sweet. Nicely done. ^_^x |
Another great poem. |
Beautiful poem, the symbolism was excellent and I loved that you chose a butterfly. You're an amazing writer, keep the poems coming! :) |
by MemoirsOfMe
The symbolism is great in this poem. Despite that it's short, you discussed very well you're intended message. I thought the butterfly was a excellent choice for your connotation, kudos. |
by Rachel RTVW
Very interesting quick fix for your fan club! Good job! |
by David
Well i was sad that you deleted the other poem. but this one is a nice one to take its place. |