Comments : Trying, But I'm Still Dying

  • 17 years ago

    by supaflyhonkyguy

    Its pretty good, nothing too special but nothing bad either. overal a solid 4

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Second stanza is greatest. I like the topic and the way you expressed emotions is good. Excellent wording makes this poem even better.
    Keep up 5/5