"The show us how wonderful like can be"
shouldnt it be life and they?
other than that hun it was great, loved it =]
thanks for my comment, let me know who you think its about and ill tell you hehe!
Loved the poem 5/5 =]
~*~Jen~*~

Hey i wanna go to that place!!

I like the innocence in this poem. Just beautiful. 5/5

I want to go to that place too.
Great poem

What a vivid spark of whimsical imagination you have. This is a wonderful flight of fantasy. Very well written, Such a beautiful place you portrayed here.

The flow and rhythmn was very upbeat and flawless.

Great job. you executed the structure of this type of poetry real well.

Was the 'The' suppose to be 'They'?

Otherwise, great job.

Jeannie

Gem
What a wonderful vision you have created with this poem :)
Love it great job!

The flowers are tended with such love and care
The sunlight shines on the unicorn's hair
The elves rejoice feeling blissful and free
The show us how wonderful life can be

I really loved this stanza!
Love your friend Cindy

Sometimes ones own world can protect you from the outside :) love this poem made me smile :) and yeah i knew you'd recodnice the stanzas :) i sent you an email explaining the whole poem did you get it?! and 5/5 for this one :)

Very nice, very talented, thAt would explain all the shiney awards, 5/5

Excellent form! Beautifully done! I love magical places!! Good imagery! 5/5!

Love it...it was a good poem for anyone to read while going through a dark time. Well done.

Innocecent poem you got here keep on writng! 5/5 good work