Good poem

I like it, i think it's a good representation of society's need to "put on a show" for everyone else, and in turn watch/judge others as well. I especially liked,
"this is all a joke to you"
it really portrays a frustration/anger with other's inability to see through your view, or not take something seriously or bother to look into it enough. I also liked,
"holding hands exchanging hearts
tearing our own souls apart"
Good job