How sad. A really unique way you wrote this. Heartfelt and lovely verse.

Great job.
Jeannie

I liked it. It held my attention and had great flow and rhyme. It had a certain appeal to it that I enjoyed. =]
Now I have competition!!
Ciao

Wow i absolutly LOVEE this poem. WOW oh my gosh!! dslfkjdsljfla it was amazing, the title drew me in and then you just held my attention, great job!

Was this for a contest?
I hope you won if it was because this is really good.
The repetition wasn't over the top and it didn't cause the poem to sound to refrained
It was just right.
5/5 m'dear
*Gem*

COMMENT # 1

great job :D the flow was fantastic and the emotion strong.. the word choice was beautiful

Very creative, I loved how you tied
everything together.
=]
I couldn't find anything wrong in this one,
and I loved the emotion put forth in your words.

Great job.
5.5
=]