WOW WOW WOW! you need to make a book. you are an amazing poet and I would buy it in a heartbeat no questions asked. This was beautiful. Your imagery and rhyme and flow are flawless and never fail to capture me.
Charisma*

Jeannie
Reading this today really tore at my heart...You have hit on very deep feelings. Excellent job!

The shattering of pieces
Of a soul that lost its breath
Are humbled by the heartache
That was singled out for death.

I relate to this so much.
Take Care Cindy