by Just Keara Mar 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
That first time I saw you, |
Sorry love. I wanted to read another one of your poems so that I could say something positive, but I can't say that I felt any better about this one, than I did of the other. It started off well, with the first two stanzas, but then the structure got lost and the words cease to rhyme. I must admit though, at the very last stanza you regained control and managed to end it well. Once again, I'm sory for being so negative, but I feel that everyone should be honest about everyone else's pieces. |
by YoungMynd
This poem is so good. |