This poem is so good.

5/5

Sorry love. I wanted to read another one of your poems so that I could say something positive, but I can't say that I felt any better about this one, than I did of the other. It started off well, with the first two stanzas, but then the structure got lost and the words cease to rhyme. I must admit though, at the very last stanza you regained control and managed to end it well. Once again, I'm sory for being so negative, but I feel that everyone should be honest about everyone else's pieces.

Brad