by aDORKable x3 Mar 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I laugh because you're stuck in my head |
I liked the way that the just because you are you was repeated, it made the whole idea come together and it made the feel of the love within the poem that much stronger..if that makes sense? Haha. Anyways, it was another great write from you, but I didn't expect otherwise. Keep it up Darling! |
I loved the repetition within the poem, it made it really stick out a bit more. I really liked the flow of this poem as well as your wording. Great Job, and keep up the wonderful writes. |
I agree with Britt! |
Sweet Excellent, I love it. It's sentimental with the constant comment of being themself. You're on my favs and I love reading your poetry. Trying to catch up to you though, you got a few I haven't read one left though. Keep writing. I love all your poetry!!! |
by Gem
Hehe, i'm in this competition, but i haven't written it yet. |