Not bad i liked it
some was a little ruff but it wasnt bad by any means.
check mine out if can

Thats really good......an amazing and soulful poem.....keep it up...

I read your 'read my poem' quote and i thought your poem was very good. i know how you feel about love most of the time, cause the poem reflects myself. my newest poem is ride of the phantom lover...

Dat is such a great poems i really enjoyed dat very good fair play 2 ya

That was a great poem very depressing and this is my kind of poem. 5/5!
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