Comments : When first i came

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Some kinda shorty but it is sweet
    Keep writing hun
    See ya
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Second line should be yours. not your. the love in this is great. this could be a love poem or a friendship poem.

    loved it. 5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by lina

    Thanx guys for encouraging me