Your Demons

I have a poem similar to this love. great work. yes, my poem was based on that song. i wanted to add a little to it. i have that song on my myspace. and i was listening to it when i was trying to write; and well she just inspired me lol. my poem is still a little too much like the song. i don't feel like i really made it my own, yah know? anway, i will write a poem soon and use more punctuation just for you love. lol.

anyway great write, thanks for sharing it =)

Thats very good, you have a real talent hun x x

Sweetheart you seemed so depressed!!! I love your poems so much but i am so confused at why you are feelin this way if these really are your feeling. Pplease read my poem "I know it's Hard."

Well i dnt give a shit about what other people had to say about it. i loved it. you shouldnt owrry about how is sounds. its about the meanin that you are tryin to put across. i liked it cheak mine out
xoxo jessie

This is very nice, i really enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work. 5/5 =)