More to Gain

by *Charisma*   Mar 8, 2007


Lost in the moment of the past
When I was in love with you.
Why couldn't all of it last?
Dreams are too good to come true.

I was trying so hard to forget
And take the pieces left of my life.
Yet, I'm living in my old regrets
Thinking maybe it was somehow right.

But I know that you never loved me
And baby, that's what hurts the most
Knowing I gave my heart completely
To such an undesiring host.

And it's no one's fault but my own
For not listening to what you didn't say.
In unspoken terms you had shown
Love for me wasn't your way.

Like an old movie I'll rewind the times
Too the good parts...ones worth the pain.
Next time I'll pay attention to the signs.
Maybe then I will have more to gain.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    COMMENT # 2

    again flawless flow.. the rhyming was good one or two seemed a bit forced... but all in all a strong write..

    and i LOVE this line
    "In unspoken terms you had shown"

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Omggg. I have tears in my eyes ;[ I can relate to this alot.. and it was just so powerful & beautiful..

    You are an amazing writer, deary.

    Oh what truth that's in this piece :]

    But I know that you never loved me
    And baby, that's what hurts the most

    ^ favorite lines.. wonderful, truly.

    Bri [x]

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    But I know that you never loved me
    And baby, that's what hurts the most
    Knowing I gave my heart completely
    To such an undesiring host.

    __

    I loved that stanza. & the last one tooo!! This poem was just amazing. Perfect. I could relate to it on so many levels! Amazing write! Never stop writing!!

    -` Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Great job! this was mad cuteeeeee. i loved the rhyming and the flow was great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    I love this poem, this absolutely my favorite poem for today =)
    what i liked the most was the rhyming, great job 5/5

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