Blooming Heart (Senryu)

by Jason   Mar 8, 2007


Rose of great beauty
stinging thorns piercing the hand
petals pour from skin

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  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    You trickster...lol...i was almost dupped into thinkin this was a Haiku...but I know better now....lol
    you have written this with an elegance far beyond the imagery contructed!!!!
    it was absolutlely beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    I love it....

    I agree with Michael and also piecing should be piercing??