Angel Angel

I really like the repeating angle angle device, it shows ones love for another and thinking the best of them even when they aren't in the best of times. Great write, I loved it!

Simple but full of emotion. It has a naïve charm with its uncomplicated structure and rhymes. A very sweet first poem. :)

Angel angel why oh why?

^ this does sound like a lullaby. I liked it.

I dont know, but when I read it I felt its likea sad lullaby. Maybe its the effect of the repetitions which I think is a great addition to this piece!

I give you a 5. very sad.