Goodbye

by Baby Rainbow   Mar 8, 2007


I cut my wrists last night,
didn't know what else to do.
You promised me everything would be alright,
you told me all I needed was you.

I'm sorry for not being there
at the times you said you'd help me.
I know you're only trying to care
but I cant hurt you anymore.

Maybe we shouldn't speak anymore,
I feel like I'm letting you down.
So I'm sorry but this is my goodbye
now I'm alone just waiting to die.

Saffie
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  • 9 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Such a sad write.

    The feeling of hopelessness, of self blame and wishing to make amends that runs throughout is very powerfully written. Even at such a young age you knew how to engage the reader and get them to live the emotions portrayed.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I can relate to the pain of loving someone and having it hurt like a wound. I love this one as well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    I really love this poem sweetie =) Great job! I can really relate to this poem as well as others... cutting myself at night and enduring the pain for someone you love. Yeah... that's sad. Keep up the good work! <3 5/5

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 17 years ago

    by LickleGirlScared

    Aww that made me cry..I wish i could of been there for you when you really needed it..I hope i can help you now tho...Lym tc xxxx smelly bum xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by LickleGirlScared

    Aww that made me cry..I wish i could of been there for you when you really needed it..I hope i can help you now tho...Lym tc xxxx smelly bum xxxxx

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