by xo kisses xo Mar 9, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
She kept her feeling hidden |
by JEFF
A little long but great read. |
by dreamer88
I cant believe this is your first poem! |
by nikki
Wow, now that was long. i liked the poem, the structure with the stanza's are great, it makes it easier to keep track of where you are, it was nicely penned, 5/5 |
by BREEawNUHH
Wow. This was amazing. You're a wonderful writer. |
I like how you rhyme with ease, however, what I said in my comment on "Forever Gone" applies to this one, too. |