To be your first poem,it was wonderful.
i really enjoyed reading it and i gave it a 5/5.
good work!

GREAT!!!---

5/5 this poem was long but interesting, I'm not into love poems but it caught my eye and I'm very glad it did. Good expression throughout. keep up the good work

OMG YOU ARE SERIOUSLY THE BEST WRITER...your poems are great...never stop writing these are beautiful

sincerly yours,

uwouldntno

Aww.. this poem is soo cute.. i like it bounced back and forth between mixed feelings.. at timers again i noticed that it dragged on a bit but still the flow was really nice which made for an ejoyable read and the word choice was grreat in describing everything you felt.. keep up the great work :D

Love the poem and it has great flow you really need to write more. well you have but you should write more and more now

I like how you rhyme with ease, however, what I said in my comment on "Forever Gone" applies to this one, too.

The way you write actually reminds me of some poetry I wrote a few years back. It brings back the memories, haha.

Good job.

Wow. This was amazing. You're a wonderful writer.

5/5.

Wow, now that was long. i liked the poem, the structure with the stanza's are great, it makes it easier to keep track of where you are, it was nicely penned, 5/5

I cant believe this is your first poem!
it made me want to cry! it so great! well done!
5/5

A little long but great read.