Just Another Emo Girl

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Mar 9, 2007


Goodbye my love. Hello to the pain.
Never again will you say my name.
Goodbye sunshine. Hello to the dark.
Never again will the sun leave its mark.

Goodbye smiles. Hello to the tears.
Alone I will stand for the rest of my years.
Goodbye to everything that I held on to,
Hello darkness, my devotion's to you.

This time I can't take another blow,
So this is my suicide. I've got to go.
As I lay this razor upon my fragile skin,
This is the end; let my afterlife begin.

The blood now pours out as I write this,
Let death come upon me with his kiss.
No more will I feel pain over him,
Goodbye my friend. My visions going dim.

(Just then she took her last breath on this world,
Never again to be called some emo girl.
He took away her life, when he said goodbye,
And now her body's cold, with one final cry.)

~*Who Cares?*~
didn't know what to call it. yeah at the end is the narrator

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  • 16 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    I liked this poem a lot. it was really insightful, in many ways. many cutters, in my experiance, feel like they're just another emo girl. Nicely done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Woww.. i dont even know what to say. this was really deep, and super sad. but awesome. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    I loved the whole goodbye this and goodbye that. If u used it thru the whole poem that would've rocked even more but the poem was still great. I think the title of the poem is fine. After all it got me to read it. Job well done. 5 outta 5 for sure. Xx

  • 16 years ago

    by XLOSTxxANDxxWANDERINGX

    Hello darkness, my devotion's to you.
    and
    Goodbye sunshine. Hello to the dark
    those were so=me of my fav lines wow

  • 16 years ago

    by XLOSTxxANDxxWANDERINGX

    Hello darkness, my devotion's to you.
    and
    Goodbye sunshine. Hello to the dark
    those were so=me of my fav lines wow