hey thanx for takin the time to read and ratin/common my on my poems,i

Oh My God this is soooo touching it's definatly from ur heart !!! wow ! top marks please take a luk at my poems no more messing around woth me + u and/or Unswered questions from an unborn child ! thanks alot u r a amazin writter loadza luv jodes. xx

well i loved this peom it was great full of your real feeling,
i to don't believe in saying goodbye as you'll always met the person again
i loved your rhyming,
i do have to agree with amanda about using proper words not slang but putting that to the side it was a great poem and you def have talent
certainly keep it up
great pieace
all my love
lorna
xxx

hey thanx for comenting guys

I think you did awesome keep it up i like this poem....you have nothing to worry about and if others think otherwise its cause they are jealous....

I loved it! 5!

That was a great poem and ur right good-bye is not forever cause there is always a chance that u will see that person again...keep writing and good job :)