Hey!...beautifully penned peice of work....loved it....kp writing!..
Tk care
xxPoojaxx

:) Love it! So real!

Its a different genre of writing. Farah... u rock. I can see that you have placed greater emphasis on emotions. Personally if feel that your this style works in making your poem a blockbuster. This poem is different from your other works. Keep writing. Njoi.