Its good. short but makes you read on and has lots of action 5/5 x

I like the poem. Makes me think of what I would say one day to my child (should I ever have one)...

That was excellent. Most likely because I can relate, so much. I hate myself at times, for my words and actions. It sucks. Heh. Fantastic poem hun, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.