The rain

by Baby Rainbow   Mar 9, 2007


I'm lying in bed
listening to the rain
hearing the wind
force it upon my window
it sounds so strong
it bangs so hard
its like my window
is about to cave in
gradually it stops
gently it calms
the atmosphere silent

but soon the rain taps
drop at a time
the pace speeds up
just like before
the rain doesn't mean to keep me awake
it means to bring no harm
its simply saying remember me
until we meet again.

saffie
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  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    I love rain, but I never thought of it this way. Imloved how you started this piece, but what I loved even more is how you ended it. Like you gave characterized rain as someone who will come visiting you again.

  • 17 years ago

    by sugarfacex

    Aww this is so sweet i like it well done x

  • 17 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    I love this poem. It reminds me of all the times i sat up all night listening to the rain hit my window.
    <3Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Thanks you are a really good writer keep it up!
    -Chelsea

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