Goddess Of Love

by RainbowSlider   Mar 9, 2007


I fell in love with Venus a long time ago.
She came to my dreams; She cuddled.
She placated my desires; She fed my ego.
She nurtured my mind; We huddled.

Someday you will find real love and know.
You'll find a woman who understands you.
You will forget about me and this window.
She will delight you and you her, too.

I still dream of Venus and her ways.
She so knows my mind and my heart.
Love songs for Venus the radio plays.
No offering too big; Love does its part.

I daydream of Venus and night-dream, too.
She guides my thoughts and my dreams.
She rules my heart; Gives me her honey-do.
Her loves knows no bounds it seems.

I live for Venus and offer my sacrifices.
Her love is like the morning in Spring.
I comb her hair and polish her artifices.
She gives me sweet love; Asks nothing.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Sorry Roy, but I felt this poem wasn't as good as it couldv'e been. I personally don't think there was much of a flow, although, I do think that your wording was good, and was the key of the piece. I think that the first stanza was the best one, and I feel that if the others would have equalled, then this piece would have been a stronger one. I'm sorry for being so negative, and believe me, it's not something I do with joy. I hate saying bad things about people's work, just as much as you probably hate hearing bad thinks about yours, but I do think it's best to be honest about people's work, just as I'd hope you'd be with mine.

    Brad

    P.S. Congratulations on being clean and sober for so long.

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