Sorry Roy, but I felt this poem wasn't as good as it couldv'e been. I personally don't think there was much of a flow, although, I do think that your wording was good, and was the key of the piece. I think that the first stanza was the best one, and I feel that if the others would have equalled, then this piece would have been a stronger one. I'm sorry for being so negative, and believe me, it's not something I do with joy. I hate saying bad things about people's work, just as much as you probably hate hearing bad thinks about yours, but I do think it's best to be honest about people's work, just as I'd hope you'd be with mine.

Brad

P.S. Congratulations on being clean and sober for so long.