Comments : I cry

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    I really liked this poem. Like the way it flows... Just mind your spelling (haas). Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by Kat

    Very nice
    i find that with every up, there is a down.
    with every smile there is a frown.
    the tears are now thundering down my cheeks

    ^^^^ fav. part

    keep up the great work!!