You decided you could drive

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   Mar 9, 2007


Today should be the day we wed
And the only thing I see is tear’s shed

You decided you could drive
If not you would still be alive

I walked down an isle today
But all I saw way gray

You decided you could drive
If not you would still be alive

I held your mothers hand
And there was your favorite band

You decided you could drive
If not you would still be alive

I opened the casket to see your face
Baby you are looking at grace

You decided you could drive
If not you would still be alive

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  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I think the repetion of "you decided you could drive" got a bit tired, only because it was said so much. this was really sad though. my boyfriend drink drives all the time and it scares the hell out of me everytime. well done.
    Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Just a few minor notes. You can easily fix those little mistakes (once the site lets you, that is) and in the first stanza, it should be "are", not "is". Otherwise, good job. Flow was a little off, but it was fine. =] Hope everything is okay...

    Ciao

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