Just a few minor notes. You can easily fix those little mistakes (once the site lets you, that is) and in the first stanza, it should be "are", not "is". Otherwise, good job. Flow was a little off, but it was fine. =] Hope everything is okay...

Ciao

I think the repetion of "you decided you could drive" got a bit tired, only because it was said so much. this was really sad though. my boyfriend drink drives all the time and it scares the hell out of me everytime. well done.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.