by I Seem to be the Heartless Mar 9, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I watched you from outside, |
by Devon
I like the begging but its gets worse towords the ending sort sound childish |
This is i must say excellent!I love how you got ur revenge,sometimes life can be that way.Anyway lovely poem.5/5 |
Wow this is very nice. i liked the way u got ur revenge on both, they cudnt have eachother cuz u cudnt have him. lol this is mad nice. keep up the great work 5/5 |